Saturday, September 26, 2009

HW 3 - blog comments 2

Jessica,

I liked how you referred us as being like robots when we try to please others instead of embracing our individuality and freedom. It seems like we basically have the same thoughts about what the second part of Banach's lecture states. A question you asked that stood out to be and made me consider my own life was "if we cant be ourselves who can we be? This question makes me wonder....we can only be who we want to be. I also agree that we shouldn't change just to satisfy others. We should want change because that's what we desire, if that be the case. To make your post longer maybe you could have elaborated more on your thoughts and you could have added quotes from the lecture to support your points.

Nice thoughts.


Michelle,

I noticed that you took what Banach said in his lecture and stated your opinion on it. It was easy to read and get what you were saying.While reading your post I realized that we we shared the same ideas about our absolute freedom and how we sometimes don't exercise it because we either come up with excuses or let other people get in the way.
I think that maybe to make your points a little stronger you could have added a personal experience.In the end I liked how you pointed out that everyone's thoughts are going to be different.

Keep it up!

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